PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson
Moonlight glinted off crystal glasses. Patrons dined al fresco on fish caught from the sea that lapped close by. He inhaled, salty but fresh. So different than the village he grew up in. Some men huddled at the bar, sneaked glances at him, sneers and frowns. Words sailed on moonlight. “Darkie”. “Probably stole to get rich.” “They’re all crooks.”
He guessed even his accented English would be an affront. To them, a sign of lower intelligence. Apartheid ended years ago, but the prejudiced were enslaved by their egos and twisted logic. A much harder trap to flee.
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In general South Africa is a caring, connected community that at times even overcomes its prejudices to shine brightly amongst humanity. This is merely an illustration of the more subtle prejudices and stereotypes that people may have against one another, seemingly harmless, but simmering under the surface.
Written for the 100 word challenge Friday Fictioneers hosted by the awesome Rochelle, who writes mainly from the persecutive of the Jewish experience of the holocaust (and so much more). I’d strongly recommend heading over to her blog to read some very interesting posts.
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Dear Fatima,
As you may have guessed, racism makes my blood boil. I wish people could see that our differences are only skin deep. “If you prick us, do we not bleed? If you tickle us, do we not laugh?”
Well done, my dear.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. This was inspired by an incident I witnessed a couple of days ago as well as your post. Glad you approve 🙂
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I heave a sigh of despair! Very well written.
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Thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful comment. 😊
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Wow! Very insightful, Fatima. The more things change, the more things stay the same, unfortunately.
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Sad but true. And thank you for reading!
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It is often the same among Native Americans here in the USA, as well as African-Americans, Amer-asians…the list goes on. Prejudice has no boundaries, sadly so. Excellent write.
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Very true. And it’s not just whites against non whites. But black people prejudiced against Asians for example. And vice versa. Usually upholding long held misconceptions of the other. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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Very subtle. Very relevant.
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Thank you dear 😊
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Wonderfully descriptive story and with a great message.
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Thank you for your great feedback.
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It is sad that such problems still persist in the world. You presented it well.
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Sad indeed. Humanity and good will just have to prevail despite it. Thank you.
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I love how you used this prompt to highlight the horrors of racism. You recreated this scene so well and I could really feel their snub. Well done.
xx Rowena
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Thank you Rowena! 😊
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We lived in the Canary Islands for years, where a black friend always drove a cheap car because if he drove an expensive one the police kept stopping him to s=check he hadn’t stolen it.
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Yep. That’s the same mentality I’m writing about. Seemingly harmless, perhaps even seen as necessary for public safety, but it’s still racial profiling.
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I love the broader context in your story. Racism is a crime that seeps into every fabric. Well done. :o)
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Thank you for reading and for your wonderful comments.
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Very impactful story. You really drove home the cutting effect of racism that lingers still.
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Glad it touched you. And thank you!
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Very well portrayed, Fatima. I often wonder what thoughts cross others’ minds when someone of colour shows signs of wealth… for too long it has been many people’s reality
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I’ve been unlucky enough to have heard such thoughts firsthand. And sometimes it’s people of colour against other groups of people of colour.
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It’s not limited to one race. Ever see the movie “Crash”? Perfect depiction of racism….
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Actually no I haven’t. But I love movies so will try to watch it sometime.
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The one with Sandra Bullock, Matt Dillon, and so many others, not the one with James Spader which is a whole ‘nother subject!
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Ha ha ha! I’d be scratching my head asking what Dale meant exactly? Okay noted that.
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Hee hee!!
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Well written story., Fatima.
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Thank you so much.
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Welcome Fatima 🙂
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Maybe not as common as it once was, but it’s still simmering under the surface wherever you are in the world.
My story is called ‘Someone’
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A strong and emotive piece. I wish we could all get along.
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Or at least treat each other with respect. Thank you Sally 😊
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Thank you for this very relevant story. I wonder how many of those subtle prejudices and stereotypes are, sadly, not so very subtle after all.
Here’s mine if you’re so inclined . . . https://michaelsfishbowl.com/2017/06/16/i-sit/
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Thank you Michael. Looking forward to reading yours too!
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Prejudice lurks in the heart of mankind. We fear what we don’t understand, and react in cruelty. History of mankind.
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How apt! History will repeat itself I fear. Thank you for reading.
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A powerful story. Well done!
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Why thank you Amie!
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Very well done, Fatima. Simple and powerful at the same time.
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Thank you Sascha!
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Well done, I’ve seen this kind of behaviour, so recognised it immediately from your writing
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I’m pleased it came through in my writing. Thank you Michael.
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You’ve reminded us that prejudice knows no borders, no skin tone, and no economic factor.
Good story.
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Thank you Dawn. I’m glad you liked it.
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A powerful account of the horrors of prejudice. Isolation and fear for the ones who are experiencing it. Sad. that in this day and age, it still exists. Nicely done, Fatima.
Isadora 😎
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The isolation it causes can be suffocating. Thank you Isadora!
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The blood of two different races bleeds red . does the pigment of the derma matter so much to separate humans? Racism is bad.
http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/06/the-siren.html
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For me, racism is not simply about black and white. It is a point on a spectrum. And the vast majority – but not all – fall somewhere along the line.
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Eric that’s a good way to describe it. It makes us look inwards and question what we find there. Thank you for reading.
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